Sorry mate - maybe I should have read that 
Not well today and day off from work so, sitting down with nothing to do and the laptop in front of me it seemed helpful.
At least what I have done matches very well with your instructions to Mark and, hopefully, passes your scrutiny.
Once again, my apologies
It's OK, I was just trying to help Mark get his head round wiking, perhaps another time. Or if you really want a bash at it, Mark, we could roll the page back.
It's not really up to me to scrutinise or pass anything, it's all a joint effort ... I just made some suggestions, hope it didn't sound too dictatorial!
Sorry to hear your feeling unwell, but if your twiddling your thumbs, your Glogs page needs finishing ... I'm dying to know how to store these things.
Also I did make some comments on the ASM page, don't know if you saw them. Is it worth adding that titration is done with 1% NaOH solution and changing the formula to read ml instead of grams? Both points confused me when I followed it to use ASM (but then confusing me is not a difficult thing to do).