We can rename the page quite easily. However, it only links to two other pages at the moment, the KH, and the GL processors so an easy job to change the links. As it may be of use in WVO filtering it may be best to rename the links to suit your page ... what do you think?
To my simplistic brain your wiring diagram looks fine. To keep more in line with Tony's you could show an indicator lamp to the right of the switch between 12 and 0V.
The float switch could link in with the PID, but IMHO what you have shown is probably better. It could link in with the Hi temp alarm contacts on the PID or an additional Hi temp switch on the processor, there's so many possibilities!
Although there will be numerous possible variations, I think we'd benefit from a page on processor wiring as a whole, written in "Noddy speak" so all can understand. That could then link to pages on the various components such as float switches, pressure witches, PIDs, SSRs and thermocouples etc. I'd be happy to give it a go, but only if someone qualified was prepared to check what I wrote and drew.